Saturday, November 28, 2009

Watching Need

Open windows. Body bare.
Are you there?

Roaming Hands. Quickened breath.
Are you watching?

Pulsing need. Licking lips.
Do you like it?

Clenching teeth. Arching hips.
Do you want me?

Tearing sheets. Blinding need.
Are you ready?

Pinching peeks. Aching screams.
Can you feel it?

Ecstasy grows. Splintering bliss.
Was it good for you?

Pounding heart. Sated desire.
Will you watch again?

7 comments:

  1. Tearing sheets??? dang

    I like this. Great sexy little couplet poem...naughty and nice.

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  2. This is gorgeous. I particularly liked the phrase 'blinding need.'

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  3. I don't know ladies, I kind of like the Splintering Bliss myself...... uh, yeah, wow. :)

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  4. my, my, my.... I agree on the "blinding need" being flawless. I love it!

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  5. WOW!!!! Look at you go. I love the last line.

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  6. I was stuck on pinching. Nipping. Growling. ...
    ...

    ..

    Excuse me.

    >.>

    X

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  7. You are a talent! You had me at "Body bare."

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