Tuesday, January 5, 2010

Breathe

I can't speak, my lips fail to form the words
My mind refuses to cooperate

I see you waiting, always patient
Forever my gentleman

When I am ready, I will ask
But promise me please

Stay, wait for me
Don't go

You see, eventually the sun will shine
My words will sing

Hold me, in your arms I'll cry
Then I'll be able to breathe

6 comments:

  1. Nice. You don't have to ask for the sun to wait. You are the sun. Shine on. ox

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  2. I really like this one, chica. =) It's beautiful.

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  3. Ditto to what Jinxie said! I really like this one too.... not as dark as some of the others, yet still full of intensity.

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  4. Breathe in deep, exhale deep. I like your words and how they follow each other to the window to peer out and listen to the rain tip tapping on the glass... I really enjoy this one. Sexy as always and a wonderful touch of nostalgia in-the-now.

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