tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7352382141048477194.post1133537984590365337..comments2024-01-22T03:18:26.896-07:00Comments on My Magic Magnifying Mind: UnwaveringDorothy F. Shawhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07726231846622344573noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7352382141048477194.post-58749676345097200462010-05-04T09:40:01.081-07:002010-05-04T09:40:01.081-07:00I completely agree with WookieStyle this needs 2 b...I completely agree with WookieStyle this needs 2 be a song... Very nice job, girl.. This poem itself is a melody, thank u 4 sharing it with us.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7352382141048477194.post-62649033567063238612010-05-04T07:23:37.515-07:002010-05-04T07:23:37.515-07:00Chica - you continue to stroke a magical pen with ...Chica - you continue to stroke a magical pen with each of these beautiful poems. Whatever the emotion is - love, fear, pain, loss....your words bring that feeling to the surface. Love it, love it, love it...love you!<br />Hugs - DiannaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7352382141048477194.post-34213576550830207072010-05-03T15:16:31.311-07:002010-05-03T15:16:31.311-07:00Even unconditional is conditional. My love for you...Even unconditional is conditional. My love for you and your poems is wholly conditional; based on an open mind and understanding. You fucking rock, sweetness. ox I agree with Wookiestyle. Your poem is lyrical.Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04614067992683578380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7352382141048477194.post-31060858689398379272010-05-03T15:09:05.108-07:002010-05-03T15:09:05.108-07:00Really like the rhyming scheme here. You're pu...Really like the rhyming scheme here. You're pushing harder to come up with techniques and styles to express yourself in more and more ways. This is good work. I've already relayed my critique, but this is a sturdy piece of poetry.Carrie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7352382141048477194.post-5069545660375143462010-05-03T15:09:05.109-07:002010-05-03T15:09:05.109-07:00Wow!! this screams out emotion and angst.... I lov...Wow!! this screams out emotion and angst.... I love it!!! again, I think this needs to be a song. you never cease to amaze me, keep it up!!WookieStylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05998536058595160497noreply@blogger.com