Come along on a magic roller coaster ride through my mind...
It'll be fun, I promise.
Question on a comma: Is that 'Navigating Crossroads with fear' or 'With fear we cannot remain the same'?Or up to the reader?
If people try to stay the same, they are just fighting Nature. Good concept here.
I tremble for the author over this moving poem of words strung together like a road with unseen curves ahead. Corner well at a safe speed. ox
love the poem...such strong words....Kudos!
Nicely done, I like the journey that you push us through with your words. Admittedly, I also like the lack of comma, highlighted by your first commentator, it forces us to make a choice. Or, better yet, reflect on what choice our mind makes for us. I would guess that it would hinge on our specific situations at the time of reading... very nice..
Can't stay the same cause eventually everything else changes around you anyway. ;)