Monday, March 22, 2010

Crossroads

Such angst

Sorrow filled

Love with

Answers

We

Seek solution

Held with

Endless despair

Our love

Unfulfilled

Decisions

Move forward

Navigating crossroads

With fear

We

Cannot remain

The same

6 comments:

  1. Question on a comma: Is that 'Navigating Crossroads with fear' or 'With fear we cannot remain the same'?

    Or up to the reader?

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  2. If people try to stay the same, they are just fighting Nature. Good concept here.

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  3. I tremble for the author over this moving poem of words strung together like a road with unseen curves ahead. Corner well at a safe speed. ox

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  4. love the poem...such strong words....Kudos!

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  5. Nicely done, I like the journey that you push us through with your words. Admittedly, I also like the lack of comma, highlighted by your first commentator, it forces us to make a choice. Or, better yet, reflect on what choice our mind makes for us. I would guess that it would hinge on our specific situations at the time of reading... very nice..

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  6. Can't stay the same cause eventually everything else changes around you anyway. ;)

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