Tuesday, April 27, 2010

Calling My Name

The wave

Crashes over me

Struggling

Crying out

Reaching for something

Anything to hold on to

Coming up for air

Just in time

Another wave

Pulls me under

Swallowing mouthfuls

The pain

Fascinating

Calling my name

Enticing and romancing me

Praying for

Release

God set me free

4 comments:

  1. Kind of erotic for a poem about pain. I wasn't entirely sure if the subject was drowning, cumming, or hurting. I'm really only settling on hurting because of the tags.

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  2. Metamutantx: JUST because I wrote the word 'swallowing ' Does not make this an erotic poem.. LOL

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  3. Other 'sexy' words:
    Release
    Enticing
    Romancing

    Things you might do during an orgasm:
    Struggling
    Crying Out
    Another Wave (of Pleasure)
    Call my name

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