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Saturday, November 28, 2009

Watching Need

Open windows. Body bare.
Are you there?

Roaming Hands. Quickened breath.
Are you watching?

Pulsing need. Licking lips.
Do you like it?

Clenching teeth. Arching hips.
Do you want me?

Tearing sheets. Blinding need.
Are you ready?

Pinching peeks. Aching screams.
Can you feel it?

Ecstasy grows. Splintering bliss.
Was it good for you?

Pounding heart. Sated desire.
Will you watch again?
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7 comments:

  1. Rachel BlackbirdsongNovember 28, 2009 at 2:35 AM

    Tearing sheets??? dang

    I like this. Great sexy little couplet poem...naughty and nice.

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  2. Carrie ClevengerNovember 28, 2009 at 9:20 AM

    This is gorgeous. I particularly liked the phrase 'blinding need.'

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  3. Flygirlie314November 28, 2009 at 11:51 AM

    I don't know ladies, I kind of like the Splintering Bliss myself...... uh, yeah, wow. :)

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  4. Jeanne Veillette BowermanNovember 28, 2009 at 6:44 PM

    my, my, my.... I agree on the "blinding need" being flawless. I love it!

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  5. Heather PalmquistNovember 28, 2009 at 11:34 PM

    WOW!!!! Look at you go. I love the last line.

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  6. XPMNovember 29, 2009 at 10:39 PM

    I was stuck on pinching. Nipping. Growling. ...
    ...

    ..

    Excuse me.

    >.>

    X

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  7. DiannaNovember 30, 2009 at 9:38 AM

    You are a talent! You had me at "Body bare."

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