Tuesday, February 2, 2010

Don't Watch

Spinning in time
My mind
A muddled mess
Trip…
Stumble…
Fall…
Ripping free
Stitches of
Emotions in
My heart
My sin
Lost
Look away
Don’t watch
It’ll be okay
A moment
An inch
Everything
Drips of you
You’re all I see
Around I go
Spinning in time
My mind
Make it stop

5 comments:

  1. a very painful glimpse of how our minds can spin out of control...... thank you...

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  2. I've felt like this before, chica. You did well in putting it all together in this poem. Good job!

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  3. emotions the windows of our souls...very eloquently stated.

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  4. Run away, stop and look back, and see that it is behind you now. I think you kicked its ass. ox

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  5. Wow. I feel like you can see into my head... a muddled mess, spinning in time. You nailed this one.

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